school: when the sudent comes to the school they should be come prepared with them materials and not to bring electronics things,because the teachers tell us that we dont have to bring electronics thing like ipods,cell phone and sometimes the principal tell us if we bring the electronics things we have problems in the school but sometimes the kids brings like ipods,cell phones and sidekick and when the securites sow them they said just keepe if you dont want to have problems with the principal.
The student has to respect the rules in the school like brining materials to write and everything that they need to bring
Sometimes the teachers tell us the bring electronics things is dangerous for the school and for them too because when the kids are listen the music in the classroom they interupt to the teachers.
The principal tell us that if you bring electronics thing you will have problems with me.
Sometimes the securities sow to the kids brining electronics so they said keepe because sometimes the principal is angry and she could cacht to you and she never will give you back.
Monday, December 17, 2007
Thursday, November 29, 2007
Argumentative Essay - Carlos
Soccer
the soccer is for everybody in the world .
I like play soccer every single Sundays in the park, when I play soccer with my friends we always win. but we have to bet money for each person for the game and I like be forward when I play soccer with my friends but when we play soccer we always carefully. But first thing that we do was get change and do a litle be of exercise and talk about soccer game and play.
we win with my friends because we play very well and we know hbow to domination the ball.
We bet money because if play we play with energy if we want to win and got moneyt.
me and my friends always carefully because some people play hard and they kick in you foot.
In the beginning of the game we first work out and than play.
And I learn many things about the soccer and That's why i am writing about these and otherway i play soccer but i learn something else and i learn how to respect each others in the game and how to carefully but sometimes the other people figth when they are loosing but the thing is i learn to win and to loss.
My friends said me that i play like rolandinho and play better than them and they said me when i play soccer i play smiled and that i dont fight like them when i play , My friends fight i dont know why when we play soccer that's why they tell me that i am a good boy when i play.
So at the end of the game we win and i feel tired and my friends too and we talking about how was the soccer game and they said that that was soo funny and we got money because in the beginning of the game i said them who loss pay so they loss they had to pay us thatt's why got money from them.
Conclucion: i wrote about soccer game because it is very intertaining.
the soccer is for everybody in the world .
I like play soccer every single Sundays in the park, when I play soccer with my friends we always win. but we have to bet money for each person for the game and I like be forward when I play soccer with my friends but when we play soccer we always carefully. But first thing that we do was get change and do a litle be of exercise and talk about soccer game and play.
we win with my friends because we play very well and we know hbow to domination the ball.
We bet money because if play we play with energy if we want to win and got moneyt.
me and my friends always carefully because some people play hard and they kick in you foot.
In the beginning of the game we first work out and than play.
And I learn many things about the soccer and That's why i am writing about these and otherway i play soccer but i learn something else and i learn how to respect each others in the game and how to carefully but sometimes the other people figth when they are loosing but the thing is i learn to win and to loss.
My friends said me that i play like rolandinho and play better than them and they said me when i play soccer i play smiled and that i dont fight like them when i play , My friends fight i dont know why when we play soccer that's why they tell me that i am a good boy when i play.
So at the end of the game we win and i feel tired and my friends too and we talking about how was the soccer game and they said that that was soo funny and we got money because in the beginning of the game i said them who loss pay so they loss they had to pay us thatt's why got money from them.
Conclucion: i wrote about soccer game because it is very intertaining.
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