Soccer
the soccer is for everybody in the world .
I like play soccer every single Sundays in the park, when I play soccer with my friends we always win. but we have to bet money for each person for the game and I like be forward when I play soccer with my friends but when we play soccer we always carefully. But first thing that we do was get change and do a litle be of exercise and talk about soccer game and play.
we win with my friends because we play very well and we know hbow to domination the ball.
We bet money because if play we play with energy if we want to win and got moneyt.
me and my friends always carefully because some people play hard and they kick in you foot.
In the beginning of the game we first work out and than play.
And I learn many things about the soccer and That's why i am writing about these and otherway i play soccer but i learn something else and i learn how to respect each others in the game and how to carefully but sometimes the other people figth when they are loosing but the thing is i learn to win and to loss.
My friends said me that i play like rolandinho and play better than them and they said me when i play soccer i play smiled and that i dont fight like them when i play , My friends fight i dont know why when we play soccer that's why they tell me that i am a good boy when i play.
So at the end of the game we win and i feel tired and my friends too and we talking about how was the soccer game and they said that that was soo funny and we got money because in the beginning of the game i said them who loss pay so they loss they had to pay us thatt's why got money from them.
Conclucion: i wrote about soccer game because it is very intertaining.
Thursday, November 29, 2007
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4 comments:
khadim mbaye
introduction: 2 because you are missing the thesis statement and the define history.
khadim mbaye
main points: 2 because did not explain the thesis statement and tou need to use different words
khadim mbaye
conclusion: 1 because your conslusion is very short and you need to say the same as you said in the introduction, but different words
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